Crossposted from Blogetary:
Way back in the 80s and before, when I was much younger and before I
had any access to computers, I was writing with pen or pencil on paper
and then when I got that down, I would set it next to my typewriter and
do my best to type it up and revise it as I typed. And then when I went
through that draft I’d set it aside and after a time I’d go through it
again, writing by hand bits to stick in here or there and crossing out
chunks and then sit at the typewriter and type it out again. Sometimes I
had notes written on napkins, paper bags and bits of paper all just
stuffed in my purse or backpack or riding somewhere in my car.
It was a long process. Sometimes I’d go through magazines for
inspiration. Sometimes I’d make up writing exercises for myself to get
better at characterization. I subscribed to an art magazine for a time
as a way to get a better grasp on a more visual way to approach writing.
But in the end, I still had to take all that input I had gleaned from
the research and exercises and actually sit down and get all those
ideas out of my head and onto the paper. And that meant writing it out
by pen and/or pencil on paper and/or typing it out. And going through it
over and over and over again.
Now, this is not a post about how things were better in the “bad old
days.” I don’t think they were better. It is much easier to come up with
a readable draft for yourself and others these days. Sure, some people
start out with handwritten drafts, but more often than not, we start
with typing it out on the screen. And it’s so much easier – the keyboard
doesn’t require the punch of fingers, just the mere tap. Correcting
mistakes is a walk in the park – no onion paper or back spacing on the
correction ribbon, no white out or keys stuck together if you type too
fast. Some writers swear by all the tools they use in Scrivener or Final
Draft. And then there are the writers who do the whole Post-It Note
thing and there are boards (all online). Research doesn’t mean going to
the library basement to peer at hard to read microfiche or pouring
through the Readers Guide to Periodicals to find the handful of articles
you’re looking for to make sure you know how a musket works or some
such thing. You can Google it. And if you like what you find, you can
download the book. Right there! You can check it out on your e-reader.
Need to do research on a personality? Great – find them on Facebook,
Twitter, Tumblr or Instagram.
But along with this new ease of getting things out on the page and
all these fantastic new “tools” has come, I think, a new set of
distractions. New ways of putting off the basic writing of the draft in
favor of the online research, the “pinning” of topics, putting together
playlists for each story or each character, creating a “platform” and
“fostering” an audience that we may or may not have using Facebook,
Twitter or blogs, creating outlines so detailed that you might as well
just sit down and pound out the words themselves. One of those things
“they” have told us out there in writer world is to ask ourselves where
we see our book in the bookstore. And so we obsess over that. We make
ourselves busy making style books for our characters but forget to
actually get those characters into the story. We get so preoccupied with
making sure our plots fit into the three-act arc or the two-pillar
structure or that all our narrative bits are no longer than 150 words
(because God-forbid someone might get bored as you actually describe the
setting or what’s going through the character’s mind – but isn’t that
what you read the story for? To get all those juicy details? Otherwise
you might as well just watch a movie!). We want to make so sure our
story will fit into all the correct slots and don’t write anything bad
before we even put anything on the page. So, we don’t write anything at
all! I actually saw a post by a writer who was so terrified of writing
anything bad that he just stared at the screen for hours. He’s probably
been paralyzed by so many “rules” floating around out there that he
can’t get himself to just get the darn story on the page.
Because that’s the point. The point is to get the darn thing on the
page. All those other things are just procrastination. It’s just the
editor part of the brain trying to keep the creative side from doing
anything “wrong.” Only the thing is, part of being creative is putting
all the crap out there and seeing what’s good enough to stick. But you
won’t do that if you’re so busy being worried about doing something
wrong or puttering with outlines and style books and “methods.” All that
stuff may help, I’m not saying it won’t, but it doesn’t do a darn thing
unless you actually get to writing and go through the actual process of
writing your tale, complete and whole, on the page. You have to give
your creative side free rein. And that means sitting down in front of a
blank screen or page and waiting long enough, usually whilst writing the
complete crap that you’re going to delete anyway, until the editor part
finally takes a walk or a nap or relaxes and lets your creative side
out.
Later – after you have gotten the complete (or as complete as you can
get it) story on the page, then and only then, can you go back and take
a look at it through the eyes of your editorial self. Then you can take
all that work you did on the outlines and style books and decide to
either use them or throw them out. After you have completed that draft,
then you can decide whether it fits into a certain form – or NOT. Then
you can double check how a musket works, or whether a celebrity would do
this or that.
All I am saying is that one of the things writers are so very good at
is procrastination. We are champions at procrastination. We have
created whole groups and industries on tools that may be useful, but
that we use to procrastinate doing the actual work.
So, again, I’m not saying to go back to the “bad old days” of
handwritten manuscripts or Underwood typewriters, but I am saying that
before you set up that style book or pinterest page, before you make
those playlists or set up outlines and file folders – consider how much
of all that work is actually going to be used for your story and how
much is just procrastination.
1 comment:
Great points. the computer makes getting a readable/usable draft much easier, but it can work against you too if you go for all the periphreal stuff spinning around the main vortex of creation. gotta get it down. Still no substitute for actual words on the page.
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